Wednesday, November 24, 2010

"Toy Story 3" Disney's Circle 7 Style

With the new release of Pixar's "Toy Story 3" some of the original artwork from Disney's Circle 7 Studios has surfaced. While working for Disney's Circle 7, writing the Monsters Inc. 2 script, we were asked to come aboard the TS3 project and rewrite the script. They were in a pretty serious time crunch and we had only a couple of months to rework a lot of the story. It was our first time writing in animation and when we took the job we were pretty clueless as to the politics that were driving this and all of the other sequels at Circle 7. We eventually began to learn about the battle going on with the potential buyout, etc.

In spite of that, they were very serious about these films and we certainly didn't want to be the guys who messed up the classic Pixar films we were being asked to write. Long story short, we finished the draft of TS3 late 2005, only to have the whole thing tossed out with the merger/buyout of Pixar. "They will never read your drafts,” we were told. We've had projects shelved before, so even though we had put our hearts and souls into the two films, we just moved on. (Ironically, we would end up working for John Lasseter and many of his Pixar creative staff a few years later on Tinker Bell And The Great fairy Rescue". An amazing experience, as we went up to Pixar and were teamed with a power trio of very talented women, Mary Coleman, Karen Paik and Kiel Murray, who over saw the film for Pixar and JL.

So, with the release of artwork on TS3, we thought it might be fun to talk about some of the images and the story we were working on. Keep in mind the opening of the TS3 that we wrote was a contemporary version of the opening scene they would use in the final TS3.

We thought it would be cool to open the film with a glimpse into the imagination of Andy while he played with Woody and the gang. In our version, what we liked (as obviously did Pixar) was opening with an intense, realistic action movie sequence...a fun way to throw the audience off balance, much like TS2. You're in the middle of this intense chase scene, only to be sucked out of that world when his mom calls him for lunch. It's there we find we are really inside Andy's mind as he plays with the toys. The idea was such a hit with the director that they immediately began boarding the sequence and hired David Lowery, a Storyboard Artist famous for his action sequences in "Spiderman 2", Iron Man, etc. We even had the same bit with the semi-truck shooting off of a bridge only to be saved by Buzz, which TS3 did with the train.

The story itself was beginning to take shape and we too had a lot of fun with a scene where the toys get trapped in a daycare facility. This was a scene originally written by Jim Herzfeld that we punched up. Ken even made a brief appearance in our draft, (back at Andy's house Ken wandered into Andy's room looking for Barbie who had recently dumped him).

The most fun we had was playing around with the different languages and characters from the other Buzz toys shipped back from around the world. They had all been recalled and were in various states of disrepair/insanity. A quite insane Zurg was the first one to introduce Buzz to his ultimate fate of not being repaired, but sent to the toy crusher. Much easier to just ship out a new one, than actually repair the recalled toys.

Finally, world class Art Director, Ric Sluiter's Viz Dev work is featured here. Ric landed on his feet after the project was shutdown, and now works his artistic miracles at Blue Sky Animation. Pretty obvious why, when you see his work, see more at his blog - http://ricsluiter.blogspot.com/

Maybe we'll get around to putting up some of our "Monsters Inc. 2 Vis Dev, when that film has its Blue Ray release!

Finally, some lessons we've learned along the way are that things do have a way of working themselves out. Pixar's Toy Story 3 has turned out to be exactly what it was meant to be and made by the people who were meant to make it...nice to have that perspective some four and a half years later.







9 comments:

Bryko614 said...

Do you know anything about the "Andy's grandma" draft of the script? Was that an early draft before you came on the show, or just fan fiction?

Bob and Rob Professional American Writers said...

Bryko614, We've never heard of that draft...but, that doesn't mean it was written by a fan. Disney had been working on sequel ideas for a couple of years before Circle 7 was created. Pretty sure they were thinking of straight to DVD back then. But, it had nothing to do with Circle 7 to our knowledge. Thanks for dropping by!

Lucci in the sky said...

Is it really a special feature? Where on the disc?

This stuff is straight-up fascinating.

babadavis1 said...

I wonder if the Pixar folk would be open to a 'Toy Story 2 1/2' with this idea- it sounds like a great adventure for Buzz, Woody, and the rest of the gang.

The Movie Kid said...

You could post this movie as a "Toy Story 4". I know that ts3 had a perfect ending, but this really sounded like an awesome movie. Could u guys also tell us a bit about the story of monsters Inc 2?

Jay said...
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Jay Judah said...

Loving the behind the scenes stuff, guys. Great to see your post getting picked up by the big film blogs.

Mr. ? said...

Hi, I just wanted to ask how would you version of Toy Story 3 have ended? Would there have been a dramatic climax scene in your and Circle 7's version of Toy Story 3 compared to the climax scene in the Disney/Pixar 2010 Toy Story 3?

I just grew up as a fan of the Toy Story films and I am curious to know what the fate of Andy's toys would have been in Circle 7's version? Please reply.

Thank you.

SamSSF said...

Not as good as the actual Toy Story 3, but I sure would love to see this! :D